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Journo 101
August 12, 2011 | 06:01 AM
Hey Jen, try not to insult many of your readers in the 1st paragraph. When you do so we stop reading. Next time, if you want us to read the entire article, try to use a "catch" line, not something that pushes us away.
I am sure Tommy B would rather have a lot of the well off visitors read a more welcoming article about this menu rather than some personal commentary on people and thier drinking water.
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